I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo soifua, Viena we really enjoyed reading your "fun fact on Taupo Lake". Also can you please correct the "min" in to "minute" and great skills that your learning. So keep on doing this so you can achieve your goals. :D from Va'a and Jimmy.
Kia Ora Viena. This is Kylie from Room 5 at EHS. Lake Taupo looks like a beautiful place from the pictures you have shared. Thank you for your information on how long it takes to get there from Auckland. I am really interested in going there now. Have you been there before?
Kia ora Kylie thank you for your comment and no I haven't been there before but it would be great if I would go there thank you for commenting on me and my buddy's Lake Taupo work!
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Malo soifua, Viena we really enjoyed reading your "fun fact on Taupo Lake". Also can you please correct the "min" in to "minute" and great skills that your learning. So keep on doing this so you can achieve your goals.
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Kia Ora Viena. This is Kylie from Room 5 at EHS. Lake Taupo looks like a beautiful place from the pictures you have shared. Thank you for your information on how long it takes to get there from Auckland. I am really interested in going there now. Have you been there before?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kylie thank you for your comment and no I haven't been there before but it would be great if I would go there thank you for commenting on me and my buddy's Lake Taupo work!
DeleteHi,Viena this is a nice work.
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