I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Talofa Viena, You have written a very clear summary of the story. Well done and I think the message you have identified from the story is really important and it's something I thought about as well when I listened to this story for the first time. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Talofa Viena,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very clear summary of the story. Well done and I think the message you have identified from the story is really important and it's something I thought about as well when I listened to this story for the first time. Ka Pai.
Hi Viena this is Neha. I like what you have wrote. Keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteHi Viena I like your My Summary on story call Carla's sandwich it so nice and cute keep on the hard working bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Viena,
ReplyDeleteNice Summary on Carla's Sandwich.GOOD JOB!!
You made a pretty good team with Tina.
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