I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Viena this is Neha. I like your poster on kindness. It has lots ways you can be kind and it is interesting. I have a question did you write it without reading about kindness or did you read a text on kindness? Keep work hard.
Hi Viena it is Victoria and Vaa,we really liked your poster you made on kindness it was inspirational and taught us to be king often.Keep up the good work.
Hi Viena and Vaa, I like your work on kindness, It gaves me alot of ideas like Ana said, Also we have to look after our environment and be kind to one another. Good job!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Viena this is Neha. I like your poster on kindness. It has lots ways you can be kind and it is interesting. I have a question did you write it without reading about kindness or did you read a text on kindness? Keep work hard.
ReplyDeleteHi Viena,I really like the one that say Never judge a book by its cover without knowing their story.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Viena,
ReplyDeleteWe really like your background and how you put a quote.
GREAT WORK!!! you make a good team!!.
By: Soloia & Maia
Hi Viena it is Victoria and Vaa,we really liked your poster you made on kindness it was inspirational and taught us to be king often.Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Viena,
ReplyDeleteyour poster on kindness gave me a lot of ideas about kindness.
Hi Viena and Vaa, I like your work on kindness,
ReplyDeleteIt gaves me alot of ideas like Ana said, Also
we have to look after our environment and be kind
to one another. Good job!