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 The wind flies in my face the journey starts,the snow is cold as ice and the mountains are like giants ahead, the warmness is going away and it feels cold and chilly, the mountains are singing in the daylight and the snow is soft as a cushion, My head feels at ease, we start the quiet walk up, never have I ever felt so worried in my life.

My hands and toes are numb as in I cant feel it at all,  we are marching up the big large mountains, in the corner of my eye the ice starts to break but it is ok, The journey lasts for hours it starts getting cold and the snow is colder and colder, as I am walking on the ice the ice breaks and my foot is stuck in the cold icy water but i get it out and my foot is cold as winter.

I get a closer look into the snow and there are sticks and stones hiding within the snow, but I am walking and I feel snow falling on my head as then I look up and there is nothing but a big cliff under me then I run to safety.

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The Fallen Soldiers

 The wind blows as the grass swings side to side,as the sun slowly sets at dawn the silence has begun, as I was lying in the silky long grass Poppies started growing and they were blood red, as I was wondering what happened here I slowly set my mind at ease.

As I was lying there thinking I heard birds singing and trees talking, there I thought this was an imagination but in the distance I heard shooting and yelling but nothing was there so I stayed calm but then  as I was about to close my eyes I heard a little sound in my ear saying “The Fallen Soldiers”.

As I heard that the wind blew in my face like racing bullets and I felt cold and chilly, the poppies were Blood red and that made me thinking why is it blood red?, and as 5 minutes passed I felt very calm and the silence was amazing but I never thought this would be this good and and self calming. 

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