I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Viena, I found your presentation very interesting, Especially your acrostic poem. In your acrostic poem with Z you have said "Zealous soldiers lied about their age"... Why do you think they lied about their age and I have read this too in Anzac history. Where did you read this? I found your recount very emotional and sad. It was as if I am reading a recount from a real soldier who was in war. Keep up with the amazing learning.
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Kia ora Viena,
ReplyDeleteI found your presentation very interesting, Especially your acrostic poem. In your acrostic poem with Z you have said "Zealous soldiers lied about their age"... Why do you think they lied about their age and I have read this too in Anzac history. Where did you read this?
I found your recount very emotional and sad. It was as if I am reading a recount from a real soldier who was in war.
Keep up with the amazing learning.