I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe Viena, great work sharing your report about China in the Olympics. They are doing very well in the Olympics with all their medals so far! I like how you finished off your report with your opinion. Ka pai.
Hi Viena. I liked reading your report on China and the Olympics. It showed that you did a lot of research. Maybe one day you can go to China and visit the cities that you mentioned. Bronca
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Ka rawe Viena, great work sharing your report about China in the Olympics. They are doing very well in the Olympics with all their medals so far! I like how you finished off your report with your opinion. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteHi Viena. I liked reading your report on China and the Olympics. It showed that you did a lot of research. Maybe one day you can go to China and visit the cities that you mentioned.
ReplyDeleteBronca