I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo lava Viena This is Tina your classmate,I really love your argumentation writing and I really found it interesting and inspiring I really love the last slide for your argumentation writing Keep up the good work!
Kia ora Viena this is Neha from class. I like your Argumentation writing. It is very interesting. I also have a question where did you get the information from? Keep working hard.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Malo lava Viena This is Tina your classmate,I really love your argumentation writing and I really found it interesting and inspiring I really love the last slide for your argumentation writing Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Viena this is Neha from class. I like your Argumentation writing. It is very interesting. I also have a question where did you get the information from? Keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Viena,
ReplyDeleteYou and your group have done an excellent job at putting all your ideas in paragraphs correctly in your argumentation writing. Well done.