I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora kōrua Thank you for sharing your character evaluations for Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. I like how you have supported your ideas with reasons. Next time it would be awesome if you added quotes from the book to further support your ideas. Is the Red Queen's head big in the book or just in the movie?
Tena koe Viena. You and your buddy Darra have both done a splendid job rating characters from the story Alice in Wonderland. I really love the aesthetics and the layout. I also love how you wrote the name of the author. The only thing I suggest you work on is grammar. I spotted a few grammar mistake while reading your mini paragraphs . That aside, this is wonderful work. Keep it up!
Hola Viena what wonderful work you have done it was really eye catching the image you picked was amazing I really like how it was layed out what a fantasic work. Victoria
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora kōrua
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your character evaluations for Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. I like how you have supported your ideas with reasons. Next time it would be awesome if you added quotes from the book to further support your ideas. Is the Red Queen's head big in the book or just in the movie?
Tena koe Viena. You and your buddy Darra have both done a splendid job rating characters from the story Alice in Wonderland. I really love the aesthetics and the layout. I also love how you wrote the name of the author. The only thing I suggest you work on is grammar. I spotted a few grammar mistake while reading your mini paragraphs . That aside, this is wonderful work. Keep it up!
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Hola Viena what wonderful work you have done it was really eye catching the image you picked was amazing I really like how it was layed out what a fantasic work.
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kia ora viena I like how you put a picture on the bottom left and show the movie/book looks like ka kite keep blogging and have a good day
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