I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora kōrua, thank you for sharing your summary of the first part of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. You have stated the characters, setting and the problem in the story. Who is your favourite character so far?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora kōrua, thank you for sharing your summary of the first part of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. You have stated the characters, setting and the problem in the story. Who is your favourite character so far?
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