I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai Viena, you have reviewed your book and justified your opinion. I like your summary on your first slide as it makes me curious about the book. I do feel like your review perhaps focuses on the movie (the 2010 one) rather than the book. The plot is quite different compared to the book!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Ka pai Viena, you have reviewed your book and justified your opinion. I like your summary on your first slide as it makes me curious about the book. I do feel like your review perhaps focuses on the movie (the 2010 one) rather than the book. The plot is quite different compared to the book!
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