I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Viena, This is such a cool poster and topic that you have worked on in this time when we all need to be very careful and smart about being healthy and having good habits. There is so much important information in your poster. Next time , could you write a list of websites, links and videos you got your information from. Well done for working so hard at your learning from home and keep sharing your work on your blog. Ka Pai.
Thank you Manpreet for the comment and I can write a list of websites and links and videos I got my information from than you for reading my work and be safe from the virus.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Viena,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a cool poster and topic that you have worked on in this time when we all need to be very careful and smart about being healthy and having good habits. There is so much important information in your poster. Next time , could you write a list of websites, links and videos you got your information from.
Well done for working so hard at your learning from home and keep sharing your work on your blog. Ka Pai.
Thank you Manpreet for the comment and I can write a list of websites and links and videos I got my information from than you for reading my work and be safe from the virus.
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