I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Viena, Such a cute little acrostic you have written about dogs. I wonder if you tried making questions about dogs in an acrostic way like - D- did you know dogs are... O- Outstanding what? what is outstanding about dogs... Have a go at making questions with the word dogs. Did you know dogs are one of my favourite animals. I have two German shepherds. One is called Zeena and the younger one is called Maximus. Take care of yourself and enjoy the Easter weekend with your whanau. Say my hello to everyone in your whanau.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Viena,
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute little acrostic you have written about dogs. I wonder if you tried making questions about dogs in an acrostic way like - D- did you know dogs are... O- Outstanding what? what is outstanding about dogs... Have a go at making questions with the word dogs. Did you know dogs are one of my favourite animals. I have two German shepherds. One is called Zeena and the younger one is called Maximus.
Take care of yourself and enjoy the Easter weekend with your whanau. Say my hello to everyone in your whanau.
Hey Viena,
ReplyDeleteYou need to make one correction- it should be do cute things as you are talking about dogs and not just one dog. Thank you.